Shadow and Light
posted: December 15, 2008
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I go downstairs and order a gimlet.
Brian Taylor - BTillustration.com December 15, 2008
At least they kept your little FSG logo....
WAM December 15, 2008
ouch
Daron December 15, 2008
Hah, thanks for sharing, I love to hear the behind the scenes scenario's other designers go through as I do myself... Great Post and excellent cover... Wonder what made them uncomfortable, perhaps the jaggedness (ahh!!! the horror!)
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Mark Fisher December 15, 2008
Paul, tough one on the lettering. Those creamy black greens are luscious.
David Flaherty December 15, 2008
I don't mind the new type, I think your art may stand out more. (I know the type was your art!) Nice job Paul, the sketches are great too.
Dennis Bolt December 15, 2008
If they wanted Metropolis, you certainly delivered, so I am a bit baffled. But why did they use such a thick ham-handed version of an Art Deco typeface?? Couldn't they use a nice version of the more understated deco that you used for the spine/author?? A thinner version with more "knife/beam of light" edges would have harmonixed with your art more, rather than that train-like face!
Otherwise, great job!!!
Deniseletter December 15, 2008
Spectacular design !!good idea to use a wrap-around image.When they decided to change the lettering,the cover losed life
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Michael Sloan December 15, 2008
Paul - Either way it's a terrific cover, though I like your lettering better. I especially like the way you made the transition around the spine to the back cover.
Cathie Bleck December 16, 2008
Really beautiful! Did you work with Susan Mitchell? FSG is one of the best publishers for illustrators to work with.
Robert Saunders December 16, 2008
Paul, great job despite their tinkering. Their font doesn't relate to your drawing, only contrasts with it; it's fused on top of your art without integration of elements. The Metropolis style despite its overtones of Retro chic is an emotional style, scary to them. That's my angle anyway.
laura t. December 16, 2008
that is CRIMINAL that they changed out your awesome type!! i got so excited about the thumbnail when i clicked on your post and read through, and the end of the story was heartbreaking. at least you know in your heart you did the better one ;)


















